Post by DGM on Apr 15, 2015 11:44:36 GMT -5
I've been thinking about writing a short story but i always go off track with it so a friend told me to write my main characters profile first then build around it so i gave it a try this is my characters profile so far it just a rough draft but i want to know what ppl thing about it or if there something i should changer your feedback will be greatly appreciated
characters profile
power:
inflict pain
he can only create pain he can only feel pain
Name:has no real name is only known as suffer
names origin:he a creature of pure suffering
power origin story:
his mother work as a scientist at a weapon research facility she was working on a top secret projector while unbeknown to her she was with child
the projector involved a new chemical weapon that had be used recently in a small village in asia intel believed that the village was just a test for the weapon and that it would be used again most likely on a area with a large population
the chemical itself once in you system would cause intense pain, sickness and in most cases insanity that is if you didn't try to kill you self to stop the pain
it was a top priority to develop a way to neutralize the chemical weapon
while working with the chemical due to a rip in one of the facility hazmat suit his mother get infected by the chemical weapon and is put in an induced comer to ease her suffering what they could not have know is the effects that it would have on her unborn child still developing in her womb
weakness:
love cute/visually pleasurable things and yummy food they are the only thing that don't bring him pain
reason:
they the only senses not affected by the affect the chemical weapon had on his body
background:
cybernetic enhances by Research 6
trained from birth to be invaluable both mentally and physically
Undergoing extreme mental and physical training
master of many fighting styles and is highly skill in most
can use any weapon with weapon unknown to him he can learn very quickly
master strategist
fluent in most languages
can use and hack most technology
tragic flaw:
he can't touch people
gender and build:
male
excellent build
has been trained by military to be use as a weapon for they own purposes
personality:
shy, happy go lucky, kinda insane and has an extreme appreciation of the good in the world
characters profile
power:
inflict pain
he can only create pain he can only feel pain
Name:has no real name is only known as suffer
names origin:he a creature of pure suffering
power origin story:
his mother work as a scientist at a weapon research facility she was working on a top secret projector while unbeknown to her she was with child
the projector involved a new chemical weapon that had be used recently in a small village in asia intel believed that the village was just a test for the weapon and that it would be used again most likely on a area with a large population
the chemical itself once in you system would cause intense pain, sickness and in most cases insanity that is if you didn't try to kill you self to stop the pain
it was a top priority to develop a way to neutralize the chemical weapon
while working with the chemical due to a rip in one of the facility hazmat suit his mother get infected by the chemical weapon and is put in an induced comer to ease her suffering what they could not have know is the effects that it would have on her unborn child still developing in her womb
weakness:
love cute/visually pleasurable things and yummy food they are the only thing that don't bring him pain
reason:
they the only senses not affected by the affect the chemical weapon had on his body
background:
cybernetic enhances by Research 6
trained from birth to be invaluable both mentally and physically
Undergoing extreme mental and physical training
master of many fighting styles and is highly skill in most
can use any weapon with weapon unknown to him he can learn very quickly
master strategist
fluent in most languages
can use and hack most technology
tragic flaw:
he can't touch people
gender and build:
male
excellent build
has been trained by military to be use as a weapon for they own purposes
personality:
shy, happy go lucky, kinda insane and has an extreme appreciation of the good in the world